radiatemyveins

Hello there! It would mean a lot if you could take some time to review this bit of poetry I wrote, called 'Enter the Menagerie.' It's in other poetry, just ...

Hello there! If you would be so kind I'd like you to review my poem. I'm not exactly sure what genre it is. Incoherent Blabbering, perhaps. Anyways, here's the link: ...

Okay. Let's get started. I enjoyed this poem, a lot actually. First of all I loved the emotion in it; the fact that you could feel what the narrator was ...

I think it's very well written, in terms of being playful and nonchalant. I don't really see the direct meaning, but then again its relative. Honestly, great job, I really ...

i thought it was very poignant and well written. Very honest... Maybe its just me, but I thought it could flow a little better. But honestly I see nothing wrong ...

A bit of prose poetry I wrote. First submission. Tell me, should it be kept in prose form, or should I opt for a more traditional stanza format? Tell me ...