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  • Fantasy Novels Re: REVISED CHAPTER ONE

    First off I want to say that I was very impressed by this piece. The quality of detail and the depth with which you went into the protagonist mind made ...

    Oct 1, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Together

    This was very good but I just have one suggestion, i would be careful with your tenses because in the first paragraph you switched between past and present tense. However, ...

    Oct 1, 2010


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