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Re: The Chain that Devides: A Death Note Fanfiction (Chapter 2)
Light slumped in his chair, arms crossed. A vague scowl stained his face. It went by unnoticed, however, as the Kira investigation drove swiftly forward like clockwork. Even the boisterous ...
Dec 30, 2007 -
Re: Of Veils and Cloaks (Or: I'll Never Know)
Of Veils and Cloaks What is it keeping me together? What it is, I'll never know. Because the smile I convey Is eroded by the day, By the grit and ...
Oct 8, 2007 -
Re: Student of the Night
Your imagery is really captivating! =] the only criticism I can offer is that some of the narrator's speech seems too archaic, and it borders on being grammatically incorrect. Looks ...
Oct 8, 2007 -
Re: When Left to myself
When Left to Myself It's two in the morning and I'm left with the dread that I'm on my own again. The sky outside is faded with a dull gray ...
Oct 7, 2007 -
Re: The Chain that Devides: A Death Note Fanfiction
Chapter One L's voice remained level and unwavering as he spoke. “ I don't want Yagami Light to be Kira.” Never did he advert his eyes from the bluish gleam ...
Oct 7, 2007 -
Re: In the Wreck
Thank you to all that have commented thus far. I'll be sure to take what you have said into consideration. And to those that have commented on the use of ...
Jul 19, 2007 -
Re: Fueled by:
Thanks for your honesty, and thanks for being my first reviewer. I did have the intent of making it a rather abbreviated poem in order to strain the point that ...
Jul 19, 2007 -
Re: Fueled by:
Fueled by: Ramen cups, Dimes in the pocket, A useless psyche degree. Pen on paper, Mouth to mic, Emotions run -Freed. Proverbial: Anthems and swords, Are all I'll ever need. ...
Jul 19, 2007 -
Re: In the Wreck
Deep in the wreck Splinted smiles and barbed wire glances, One more to the list of failed romances, All the while thinking: I'm sure he meant well, But the record ...
Jul 19, 2007 -
Re: Hey there...
Hey everyone. Salutations! I thought I'd introduce myself, considering I've only been on here once before, sooo: Hi, my name is Chelsea. I typically go by my nickname, Chelsifer. I'm ...
Jul 15, 2007
