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Re: You vs. Me
I edited and everything so I hope it still works. Please tell me if it doesn't. Your comments really helped.
Fri Feb 13, 2009 1:20 am -
Re: Calling Your Name Again
So I like the poem, and the idea of it But it's very repetitive In my opinion, just say what you mean the first time It makes much more sense ...
Sun Feb 01, 2009 5:59 am -
Re: Their souls took flight
So... I'm very confused to be honest The last lines go together but the rest was kind of out there If you could tie it all in somehow and make ...
Sun Feb 01, 2009 12:01 am -
Re: Steps
That's really amazing I love the part about love because it holds so true Your imagery is brilliant Keep writing!
Sat Jan 31, 2009 3:47 am