questcrewforever

Authors note : So, i'm not sure exactly where i was up to, but i'm pretty sure it was about here... Enjoy? And again, i'm sorry about the layout... it's ...

Author's note : This is from Jamie's point of view (which is why it says her name at the top) **********************************************************************************************************

i'm not really sure what to think... It seems like it could be about so many different things, so, meh, i guess i really don't have much to say either, ...

Heya, It's a good idea, but as far as first impressions go, i could barely stay focused long enough to read it. It was long, and the layout isn't that ...

Heya, This was really cool and deep. Not a whole lot to say actually, except, should it be 'made in china' not made 'in china' Well, that's the only thing ...

Heya, So, i'll admit, as soon as i read Tokyo i became a million times more interested, so i might be a little biased because i'm fascinated by places like ...

Jamie, a vision in white. She was dressed in a low back, creamy white dress and she flaunted her amazing wings… Wings of an angel… The dress was floor length, ...

This is rather good actually, true, it is overused, but you make it work =D Just a hint, be careful because at the start you miss spaces, and i'm not ...

This is a really great poem, i really liked it. Sorry, i don't really have much to say aside from that, which is a lot given i'm not that into ...

Once upon a time there lived a boy and a girl who shared a dark past, a grim present and a horrifying future. This is the story of Luca and ...

Night and day… Modern day gladiators… The two most skilled warriors, both fighting for their lives. Two rivals, about to make history. Night, the passive, mysterious fifteen year old girl, ...

Hey! First thing i really noticed about this piece of writing is that you change tense towards the end. It starts out in past tense and ends in present. Then ...

1) Babe I cry myself to sleep at night, Just coz I know that I can’t hold you tight. This is all just too real for me, I can only ...

I’m Dragon, and my true adventure started when I was about eighteen. I befriended a girl, and she persuaded me to join a rebellion against the adults. We snuck away ...

“Okay! I’m sick of this! We’re all going to the beach today! We’ve spent way too long hiding out here!” I cried, finally snapping. This was no way for the ...