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Honestly I loved it. It was great and I could toltally relate. Great job!

Great poem! I know everyone is pointing this out but I think you meant to say "despise" not "despite". It's really cool how you are able to portray the emotion ...

I liked the poem although, I think there were a few things you could fix or whatever. I think you should draw i the reader in more in the first ...

I really liked this poem. It was cool how it started out with a question, it really drew me in. Also, for some reason I like how it is combining ...

I really liked this poem. It's emotional. I don't really get the first stanza though. Other than that I thought it was great.

I tell him I want to die He says please don't cry I say why shouldn't I? There's no hope left in me He whispers one last time, don't ever ...

I think that you should draw the reader in more in the first line. I know I'm not good at that but it would be better so that way the ...

Hi, I'm Aidan and I am new to friend suggested it to me. :D I write poetry normally. I write all the time normally at night is when i get ...