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Hi! Well, I really liked this. It was well written. I think the second stanza would fit best for the first, if that is what you were asking? "Cuz no ...

Oops, yeah it was supposed to be ever. And I meant to put possibly, sorry. Thank you for the review I really appreciate it.

I really liked it. I couldn't find spelling errors but then again I'm not so great at that. But I really liked the poem. I could really relate right now. ...

I couldn't find any spelling errors and the poem was great. Keep writing!

****I just felt I needed to post something, so this is what I came up with. Hope it's ok (: Do you ever feel alone? Like you're so fragile, Numb ...

I liked it, most poems I read are all dark. But this one was very light and nice to read. Nice job!

I liked it. You painted a lot of pictures in my head with that.

Well, I thought it was ok... Maybe I'm just a little slow or something but I didn't really get it all that well. But it still was good. Sorry this ...

Wow this was great! I loved it, great job. And the message in this was really cool.

Hey, this was really good. Great job with the rhyming! I can never make my poems rhyme.And I didn't think it was confusing at all. I feel like "Fuck the ...

This was good, interesting too. Some of it seems like you were just trying to ryhme and not make sense. But other than that it was really good. I liked ...

I liked this. It was good but like Kafkaescence said I think you need to go back and add commas and periods where needed. I liked the repetition.

Hey! Haven't reviewed in a while and I'm still new so sorry if I'm not helpful. I really liked this, most of my poems are about this topic. I thought ...

Wow. Simply beautiful! I love the emotion you portray and the ending is great! Keep writing!

This was really cool! I loved how you took the word advertisements and made a poem out of it. Very creative!