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Re: Intimidating Shadows
I struggle with this sometimes...But I know that God loves me just as much as anyone else and that always gives me hope. I live in someone's shadow and I ...
Nov 12, 2011 -
Re: When I thought I knew you
Hello there blackroz!! I don't have anything to say that the others haven't already said but I just wanted to encourage you to expand on this and perhaps add some ...
Nov 12, 2011 -
Re: The first bullet...
Hai Lorny dear!! =) Woot! Second to review XD Okay so I just want to say that this was a good poem and indeed short and straight to the point. ...
Nov 12, 2011 -
Re: Reading
Hai there Audrey!! Hope you are doing fine =) Woot! First to review!!! XD So I want to start off with saying that I absolutely loved this piece! And you ...
Nov 4, 2011 -
Re: Goodbye to Goodbyes
Helloo there creativityrules!! I'm here to tell you that I like your poem! The others already took care of criticism and made suggestions so I'm not going to go there ...
Nov 3, 2011 -
Re: Open Up for Me
This is totally my longest poem ever XD Wrote it about my best guy friend. The 'he' you see in part 4 is his father who left him when he ...
Nov 2, 2011 -
Re: Love is Lost ...
Hey lorna! Great write! Totally loved it =) Great job on the rhyme and the words and imagery. Thanks for sharing and hopefully your friend will feel better soon. Will ...
Oct 29, 2011 -
Re: A Dream
Lol those kind of dreams are crappy XP This review will be kind of short because I don't have a lot to say XD I liked it and it was ...
Oct 29, 2011 -
Re: Ban the User Above You [7]
Banned for banning mai ducky because I deserved being eaten.
Oct 29, 2011 -
Re: Report a good member!
Murtuza - He is new on this site but he is reviewing lots of works and is kind and sweet to everyone. And though chat can be a very scary ...
Oct 26, 2011 -
Re: Keep Walking
It's something we all have to go through, This travel filled with pain and loss. Tears scar my heart because I have to. I know I can't stop and walk ...
Oct 26, 2011 -
Re: One Word Will Change A Life (Chapter Two)
Hellooo there! =) Here as promised to review your story =) I want to start off with saying that it's a good write and it kept me interested til the ...
Oct 25, 2011 -
Re: Oh, Marissa Marissa
Hello there! =) So I was wandering around and saw this piece and tadaa here I am to review it for you XD (obviously) I want to start off with ...
Oct 23, 2011 -
Re: Cheesecake Icon
D'awwww that's so adorable mai shiney person! XD
Oct 22, 2011 -
Re: Lingering Guilt
Hope you'll enjoy =)
Oct 22, 2011
