qaralynn

nice write I really like the lines: Just one single spark Can light the darkest of dark. One pebble in the ocean Can set the water in motion..

I like this write! but you should consider to rewrite: I opened my eyes this morning And most everything was just the same Except you weren’t there to hold my ...

I like this!!! and your right it looks like my poem is an answer to yours!

I really like this piece! Thanks for waking us up! XD

nice write! I do suggest you change 'drip' into something else.. Because drip doesn't really seem to fit in this poem but either way: I love it!

I love this..don't have any critiques

love this! maybe you should leave out 'just' in the last sentence, because I think it would sound better.. So just in case he won't be listening I'll just take ...

You're always wearing a mask Afraid to show the world Who you really are You never stop acting Never stop hiding Your emotions You always smile And you always laugh ...

beautiful!!! perhaps you should change fish into something else yeah and I didn't really get the 'heart soul' thing either but other than that: I absolutely love it! great write

I like it! You shouldn't change the ''ain't'' because it sounds good.. perhaps you should change: ''life awesome'' into: "that life is awesome" but either way, great work!

heey nice write!! I really like the imagery.. It's not really clear what's really seperating you though but other than that great write

hahaha nice write!! and that while your having writers block!!

aahh I really like this!! great write..

this is really great! I absolutely love it

hahahaha lol XD nice work!!