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Re: Goodbye
helloo I don't have any criticism for you and I don't really know what else to say than that I love this write! :) Especially the happy end..It's beautiful Favorite ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Too late
I'm walking through these empty halls filled with memories of you surrounded by a silent darkness your feelings break through And I feel your pain I feel your tears stream ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: It's okay to cry
Stop pretending like you don't care, Because I know you do. I can see the tears that you are trying to hide. Thanks for looking after me, But now it's ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Those That Stood Ahead of Us
helloo! I want to start of with saying that this is a good write with a nice rhyme in it! Some things I noticed: They stood ahead of us, skin ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Heart of Hearts
helloo! This is a beautiful write and I love it!! I think a lot of people can relate to this..I sure can =) I don't really have criticism for you, ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: The Lightning Strikes
helloo! I'm not really good at reviewing so be warned :D At first I want to say that I really like this poem! I love the imagery in this..I can ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Like the Wind
helloo! I want to begin with saying that I absolutely love this poem. It's original which makes it even better XD I don't have any criticism for you really..I just ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Stalking My Stalker
hellooo my SOLLYPLUSHIEEE!!!!!! I'm going to review this..well actually I'm just going to say that I like it!! XD This made me crack up! =D Favorite part: Yep, my dear ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Slight Smiles
helloo I absolutely love this poem!! This puts a smile on my face :) I don't have any criticism for you..I'm just gonna quote my favorite parts XD: I love ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Painful Reminders
helloo, I want to start of with: This is absolutely beautiful and sad! You have captured that feeling of being hurt very well in this is so sad when things ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: You were wrong
You said life is too short, Don't leave things undone. But now I'm standing at your grave, And realize life isn't just about having fun. You never took anything serious, ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: To Be Cool.
helloo :) This is a good write..It's true that people these days think they have to be like that to be 'cool'.. You must dress this way to be cool. ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Because I'm a Christian
hellloow shiney :) I love this you already know XD I really don't have any criticism for you.. :) I think a lot of christians can relate to this..especially the ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Raison de L'insomnie
helloo!! :) *bamboozler hug* At first I want to say that this is a great write..I really like this as a poem on its may be short but it has ...
May 3, 2011 -
Re: Not insane, just different
He greeted me awkwardly. I felt sad for him knowing that he was having a hard time, but at the same time it really pissed me off. I wasn't any ...
May 2, 2011