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Ksenia I tried to come up with a name, but my mind was numb and I gave up. "Ksenia. That's-that's my real name." Great, now he knows your name. I ...

Ksenia "Hi. I don't think I've properly introduced myself. Name's Red." I smiled shyly at him and shook his hand. "Hi." I cleared my throat and let go of his ...

Ksenia "What if -just a thought- we all stuck together, since obviouosly none of you, from what I've heard, are suposed to be on this bus. And there are laws ...

Ksenia He waved me over and tried to comfort me. I walked towards him while still rubbing my arms. They had smashed into the seat in front of me when ...

Ksenia I was standing on a distance from the bus and stared at the forest in front of me. My arms hurt but I was pretty sure I didn't break ...

Ksenia Drea sat next to me again and had her arm around me. It made me want to cry that she was trying to comfort me when she herself just ...

Ksenia Drea got up again and greeted the two new passengers. She reminded me more and more of my mom, who would have done the exact same thing. Sadly I ...

Ksenia The girl named Drea suddenly broke down and started to cry. You still think she is one of them, Ksenia? I felt like beating myself up for being so ...

Ksenia "Are you ok, hun? I'm Drea, If you didn't hear" I didn't see her coming and her question made my breathe get caught in my throat. She seemed to ...

helloo! Since the others already took care of the criticism, I am only going to say that I love your poem! XD I have this discussion with a friend of ...

Ksenia I was waiting impatiently for the bus to arrive when I spotted a woman on the other side of the road. I quickly turned around to cover my face ...

just so you all know..I kinda changed my characters history :)

heeeeeeyyyyyyyyyyyy SOLLYPLUSHIEEEEEE XD I feel very sorry for you right now because I am totally hyper and decided to review your write!!! *jumps up and down* mwuahahah I promise not ...

thanks XD

helloo yuriiko!! I love this! :D that's all I am going to say yuss *nods* there's nothing to criticize anyway XD