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  • Other Poetry Re: Death? Are you there?

    helloo kjr5horses! I'll be reviewing this for you today! I want to start off with saying that I really like this write. It has a lot of emotions in it. ...

    May 29, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Some of my poems from NaPo.

    hellooo jass! *hugs* I am going to review poem number six, because it is my favorite one!! :) I love the idea behind this poem and I just love how ...

    May 29, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Sweet Droplets and Steampunk Clock

    heey nicolas!! I will be reviewing your awesome pictures!! *Jumps around* I want to start off with saying that you really have talent! Those pictures look very professional and could ...

    May 29, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Make Me Whole

    helloo! :) Since the others already took care of the criticism I am just gonna stay at saying that it is an awesome write! :D I do suggest you put ...

    May 28, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: [deleted]

    helloo lilprincess! I'll be your reviewer for today! :) This is a nice write!! Even though it's pretty short, it has a lot of emotions in there. I would write ...

    May 27, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Look at what you've done.

    helloo! I'll be your reviewer for today :D I want to start off with saying that I really like your write. I would put it in another form though if ...

    May 27, 2011
  • Archive Re: Dream on

    Ksenia The others were standing behind a rack of candies. Drea came to us and put her arm around me while looking at my arms. "don't worry girl, well get ...

    May 26, 2011
  • Archive Re: Dream on

    Ksenia I rubbed the Kleenex against my arms and tried not to fall while running next to Red. We both didn't say anything until we reached the road again. The ...

    May 26, 2011
  • Archive Re: Dream on

    Ksenia Red was suddenly standing in front of me and extended his hand to me. I wiped away my tears while feeling really embarrassed. You're weak! You're showing him your ...

    May 25, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Popularity

    heeey an! I will be your reviewer for today :) I want to say that this is a really good poem but I suggest you take out the cussing. It ...

    May 24, 2011
  • Archive Re: Dream on

    Ksenia I stopped running to catch my breath and looked around me. I'm in the woods..how typical. I leaned against a tree and noticed that I was the only one ...

    May 24, 2011
  • Archive Re: Dream on

    Ksenia "Don't...don't talk like that. About dying, I mean. It's...just, don't. Weirds me out, y'know?" I bit on my lip and wished I hadn't said anything. BIG FAIL..again.. I figured ...

    May 23, 2011
  • Archive Re: Dream on

    Ksenia "Spain." Wow..that's quite far. "That's the goal, anyhow. I dunno if I'll actually make it, but I'm gonna at least try. Where are you planning on going?" It looked ...

    May 22, 2011
  • Archive Re: Dream on

    Ksenia He patted me softly on my back and tried to comfort me with his words. It seemed like he didn't really know what to say. "It'll be fine. Don't ...

    May 22, 2011
  • Archive Re: Dream on

    Ksenia Michael. I decided I liked that name and smiled at him for not giving up on talking with me. "Pretty awful, huh? I personally can't stand it. 'S that ...

    May 22, 2011


gonna be honest, i dont believe in the moon
— sheyren