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Re: The Escapees
Xia I couldn't help but smile at the image of Leroy holding the little girl tenderly. I started to walk next to him and smiled at the little girl. "What's ...
Jul 5, 2011 -
Re: The Escapees (Special Features Disc)
hahah kay :) Hope you're enjoying your vacation.
Jun 28, 2011 -
Re: Mine.
KARATEPUPPY WITH A FIRE HEART!! xD *HUGGLES TIGHTLY* Soo here I am to review your poem! I see that the others already took care of the criticism so I'm just ...
Jun 28, 2011 -
Re: In my Box
Heey deanie! I'm going to keep this short because I should actually be making homework XD But I like this write! It's something different and that's good. I think it ...
Jun 28, 2011 -
Re: The Escapees
Xia I closed the backpack and observed how most of the group was standing around some tube. No need to bother when I don't even know what it is. Drustan ...
Jun 28, 2011 -
Re: Ban the User Above You [6]
Banned for making a blue thingy tell me to smile
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: Epigraphs
Heey awesome co-captain Tori!! *does the secret green handshake* I'm going to try to give you a good review but I'm not really good at reviewing stories. So forgive me ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Young Writers Society Slow song!
Helloo Dasiamari!! This song totally put a smile on my face XD I like it! I do suggest you expand on the sentences though (sorry if that isn't good english ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: I miss the Rain
Heey annie! I will try to give you a good review but forgive me if this won't be helpful at all =) Okay, so I want to start off with ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: :(
helloo hayden! I'm going to keep this review short because I don't really have a lot to say =) I liked this write and it made me smile XD It's ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: untitled
Helloo Bunnie that isn't dead! XD I'm going to try to give you a good review and forgive me if I'm not helpful at all :D I really like this ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: When It Was Perfect
Helloo fellow greener stargazer!! *does the secret green handshake* XD I will try to give you good review on this, but please forgive me if this is not helpful at ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Serving For You
Helloo! =) I want to start off with saying that this is a strong piece and It has a good message behind it. We should never take life for granted ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: My Pea Plants
Hellooo sarebearrrr! *glomps* This is a really great piece and I'm in love with it! :D There's nothing I can criticize about so this is going to be a pretty ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Pieces
Helloo again! XD So just like your other pieces I like this one too! XD *clicks like* I love the idea behind it and how you worked it out. Especially ...
Jun 26, 2011
