pusu_kala

Hi Ive joined recently and I especially enjoy writing poetry but now i've sort of jumped of the line and written a really dramatic and vivid short story- i hope ...

Insany takes over when you have nothing to believe in, I wanted to write something very rough and different to my usual style, something you would have to really think ...

that was simply amazing: D very catchy! and it made sence, thse things usually dont so i was really pleasantly surprised =) You far surpass Yahoo; Comcast can't compete! so ...

8/10 you made me laugh:D

I expressed the depressed thought I ocassionally have, this is the result: Below the branches, here about, Do not you sense my fear and doubt? Aside glistening rivers, sparkling streams, ...

I loved the 1st and 2nd paragrapgh and the rhyming in all of them was excellent! Only problem i had was the 2nd paragraph A spinster-to-be can already see what ...

I liked the chorus a lot! You have some working on the lyrics ike in here: Are your hero we need, the hero, We asked for? Are you the hero, ...

Anssi...I really hate songs like this they bore me to the death:D the lyrics were good but i hate the "ooh"s and "oh baby"s like this: Love will never go ...

Thanks alot guys! I've fixed aspects that needed fixing now- it does look and sound better now that I corrected it after your comments=) Great reviews

(chorus) Oh please Take me back to 90's I'd give anything to go through it all again Though I've forgot a lot I know this (dot, dot, dot): It was ...

Hahahahaa I laughed for atleast a minute when reading this: Edward: I’m so sparkly! WHEEEEE!!! I didn’t know I could be even hotter! Superman: *hands on hips* I believe you ...

I'm not that good in english poetry(still), but i'm trying my best(please review): Around the corner I have a friend, in this great city that has no end. Yet the ...

That was great work! I really liked the overall impression Watch how the dice will roll Thats my favorite part, the dice rolling just never lets you down! You made ...

The title is idiotic boyfriend and the poem says this: her strong stand shown as idiotic boyfriend. you talk about a girl as a boyfriend? I think you might want ...

The poem depresses me. It puts me down as a girl...like the dramatics of it though=)