purplepen

Thank you very much! :)

Aw! Their first kiss! Karen was absoutely hilarious! I loved this. I didn't see any grammatical or spelling mistakes. Only two more to go. Keep it up!

It was short, but very detailed, which makes up for it. I can't get over how well detailed it is! I didn't spot any errors, and it was very well ...

Poor Carl! I feel really bad for him. Peter's doesnt relize how annoying he is! haha! It was HIGHlarious! Annyway, another great chapter. Keep up the good work!

Aw! Peter's so cute when he's trying to flirt! I found this chapter to be verry interseting. Keep up the good work! haha! :)

Peter's awesome! haha! People keep saying that he sounds gay and stuff but I like him! I like Eli too, but I like Peter just a tad bit more. haha! ...