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Thanks to all of your suggestions! im feeling alot better now lol

OK. I didnt really understand it all. for instance, you stated your mom was in the hall. then a couple lines later shes been gone a long time? where was ...

lately i have been feeling like writing,but i just cant seem to get the words out! now im not even wanting to write...its making me sad. has anyone else ever ...

WOW. this is awesome. you should get it published (if you already havent.if you have, please tell me where i can buy it!) Are there anymore spots for dream creators? ...

My favorite was the last line :)

So here is a poem i wrote a couple years ago. I'd really appreciate some suggestions for a better title, advice on writing better poetry, and what you think of ...

The Sandollar Dad put the truck in park and got his camera out.He aimed the lens,steadied it,and took a picture of the tumbling waves. "Isn't this great?" Mom said as ...