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Thanks everyone,for the reviews :) I edited it to change the names. I did have fake names but decided to use our real names lol

Ooooh i like it :) But i agree, you should expand on it...oh! maybe you could do a whole book series and have Emma and Logan getting egaged,planning a wedding, ...

Loved it,like always!:D But i think that here: His intoxicating presence overwhelmed me. I couldn’t get my heart to calm down, nor the butterflies in my stomach. He leaned down, ...

Ah, thanks ...freak ha ha. It seems something always gets past me....

***** Okay, i believe this is the first 'romance' iv'e written. It's based upon the relationship my fiance and I have. The title is something my fiance said, describing the ...

Can i just say...wow! All of your stories are amazing! Everytime im done reading these stories i feel like ive been in another world. Good Job! :)

**** this came from a writing assignment from a book called 'the write brain' (an amazing book!!check it out= ) Just looking for some opinions...***** Dearest Allison, Thank you ,thank ...

hmmmm.... That was a nice story,veryentertaining,i loved the twisting at the end! but perhaps you could make it a bit more descriptive? Where exactly are they anyways? and when steven ...

i loved that! your characters feelings are described very well. I would,however,like to know what they look like. Overall it was a great romance. You will be posting further chapters ...

The Christmas Tree that never left Oh Christmas tree, Oh Christmas tree How lovely are your branches! In November your pine smell I craved, So my father, for me he ...

That was interesting....i could definitely see that being performed in one of those poetry slam....things. What was it about though?? I dont know, maybe i just cant comprehend the elaborate ...

Wow....that was very touching. im not very good at reviewing poetry....sorry i cant give you all the grammar corrections and whatnot. To me there was nothing wrong with it.... It ...

meanwhile two unicorns, Jeffry and Google, were prancing in a field of daisies. Jeffry spotted a........

*** This is the first chapter of a book i am writing. I have an introduction,but its not complete.i'll post it when its done. For the sake of understanding,its a ...

I loved this story. you described everything with great emotion, i felt as if i was there watching this take place. :D Thank you for sharing this with us! I'll ...