purplebottle

hey! i really liked this and i loooved the title. buuuuttt, i think maybe you can write poems without giving a sentence to each line and maybe break them up? ...

Thank you, Modernist. I like you. (:

Hello luvduv, (this is only because of the video of our one-night stand that I hope you won't send to my father) so let's see, what do we have here? ...

hey it's really good i really liked it :) i didn't really get the second part though, all i see are lines. but good job on the rest. keep on ...

October’s Monday, morning, a grey drizzle clad the grey town, and the smell of shone-shine and wet cigarettes still with lipstick marks and the soured beer on the short dresses ...