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I loved it, plain and simple. From the begining you had the reader falling in love whith Zayn, but i had honestly assumed he was part of a prologe and ...
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Re: The Orphan From The Future (Prologue)
The story line has serious potential. I don't know what you are planning for, but it feels like it building up to be an adventure story (got to love those). ...
Dec 22, 2010 -
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I love how you go from having the reader believe that Luis is just some normal person and in love (girlfriend/boyfriend) with violet to fatherly figure to savior to wherwulf. ...
Dec 20, 2010 -
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Wow just wow. From the first paragraph you had me hooked. I really loved your descriptions and how we don't even konw who these people really are yet but I ...
Dec 20, 2010 -
Re: Just Sarah:Chapter 1
The Elemental War Just Sarah Book One “Missed a spot.” I don’t want to nag her, I mean, she can get so stressed out, but honestly it’s just going to ...
Dec 20, 2010
