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  • Fantasy Novels Re: Deleted

    I loved it, plain and simple. From the begining you had the reader falling in love whith Zayn, but i had honestly assumed he was part of a prologe and ...

    Dec 25, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: The Orphan From The Future (Prologue)

    The story line has serious potential. I don't know what you are planning for, but it feels like it building up to be an adventure story (got to love those). ...

    Dec 22, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Deleted

    I love how you go from having the reader believe that Luis is just some normal person and in love (girlfriend/boyfriend) with violet to fatherly figure to savior to wherwulf. ...

    Dec 20, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Deleted

    Wow just wow. From the first paragraph you had me hooked. I really loved your descriptions and how we don't even konw who these people really are yet but I ...

    Dec 20, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Just Sarah:Chapter 1

    The Elemental War Just Sarah Book One “Missed a spot.” I don’t want to nag her, I mean, she can get so stressed out, but honestly it’s just going to ...

    Dec 20, 2010


You may deem me romantic, my dear sister, but I bitterly feel the want of a friend.
— Mary Shelley, Frankenstein