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Re: Clown in the dark
Hey! Here for a review! I'm clutching my head between my hands, the horrible headache denying me of thinking. A sickening feeling shakes me as I vomit- again, according to ...
Jul 3, 2011 -
Re: New Glory
I have never been a patriotic person, but this poem made me want to be. You had good immigry with very few words. I don't see anything that really needs ...
Jul 1, 2011 -
Re: Sparrow and Spaghetti: Chapter 2 part 2
Here he comes. It’s our turn. No one is really here anymore except those stragglers still pulling out of the parking lot. No one left to see the horror on ...
Jul 1, 2011 -
Re: Sparrow and Spaghetti: Chapter 2 part 1
Cages line the edges of the clearing behind the auction house. The brutish man leads the crowd of docile families into the center. Lines of the emaciated adoptees file into ...
Jul 1, 2011 -
Re: Religion causes more problems than it solves
This seems totally absurd to me. The implication of going to hell is a much, much, much worse one than getting killed while drunk, and yet American Christians seem to ...
Jul 1, 2011 -
Re: The Night King Chapter II-part I
Hey! Here for reviewing! The presence was strong. It was a young woman and she was troubled and afraid. He wanted to reach out and help her, but she was ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: The Hunting Dog - Chapter 3
Hey! Here to review! I haven't read the ealier chapters, so if I say something that makes no sence compared to what you already wrote, please ignore it. The man—nay, ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: The Princess and the Stones, Chapter 2
"I won't let go until you surrender!" "Can you at the very least get off, you're crushing me!" "Not until you surrender, Simon!" "Maria!" Maria simply laughed at her captive. ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Sparrow and Spaghetti: Chapter 1 part 2
As I watch others place their bids and wave about their filthy cards, I become more certain. That is Beth. Turning to my Dad, “Who are we buying?” “I’m not ...
Jun 20, 2011 -
Re: Sparrow and Spaghetti: Chapter 1 part 1
This is my first time writing in a while, so please be brutal. I think something is wrong with the first couple of paragraphs. Help? It really could be worse, ...
Jun 20, 2011 -
Re: Booty Shorts
Hey JoJo! I'm not much of a poet (project for the summer) but I loved the message! I'm so sick of people wearing shorts so short that their but is ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: I Don't Wanna Wear My Pants Anymore!
And THAT is the exact reason that I refuse to wear skiny jeans (haha my pants were so bad that I lost feeling in my calves). Lets just say that ...
May 23, 2011 -
Re: Phoenix: The Fire Bird (Contest Entry)
Hi! Wow, this is a really good plot. I love the intro, it's so unique and it fills you in without an info dump (I don't know about you, but ...
May 9, 2011 -
Re: What if...
I would turn myself into a sponge and then shoot all the water I had to drink back out at the person who made me drink it. What if an ...
Apr 2, 2011 -
Re: Rebecca Black's Friday
I kinda feel bad for her, but my gosh that is one of the worst songs I have ever heard! I heard that she can actually sing when they turn ...
Apr 2, 2011
