purpleandblue22

Hey! Here for my review! I love how by the end of the first paragraph, I was already slightly attatched to the charectors. “Good Lord, Isabella,” Giorgio (who had preferred ...

I don’t know when I started running, but I don’t think I have ever gone this fast in my life. Doors and lights seem to blur together. I follow the ...

All right, if you guys have read this far into my own little mess, I congratulate you (and THANK YOU!!!! :D ) I just want to say, there are plot ...

There is only one path, so I suppose I should be happy that I’m not going to get lost, but I would still love to be able to breathe again. ...

Her head feels like a lead weight on my leg, but I can’t say the same for the rest of her. I honestly thought she was starving before; I underestimated. ...

Did anyone ever tell you, editing your work is incredibly hard? I honestly can't fand any errors. I love Lilly's voice in all this. She sounds so innocent. Please find ...

Again, you failed to dissapoint! I searched through it and I couldn't find anything wrong with it. I'm just wondering, who is Roxanne? I might have just missed reading about ...

Yea, I just started my novel (working on Chapter 3). It's about what would happen if about 30 years ago America was taken over by an extreemist religion from the ...

Hi! I'm guessing this is an exerpt. Well, it worked. I really want to know what is going on in your book now :D . I saw no major gramatical ...

Hey! I like your poem, it has an interesting topic. I can't explain why though, but I feel like it runs slow (I really would explain why, but when I ...

Hi! Here to do some reviewing. First off, really good. I'm getting a hint of what is going to happen later and I'm curious about it. Kadalo was a tribe ...

Hey, reviewing time! I saw no issues, except the odd enters every once and a while. This was beautifully written, plain and simple. I don't know why, but the ending ...

Hahahaha! I loved that! I'm a monster Harry Potter fan, and this did it justice. He told me where he went! Him and my uncle Ron and aunt Hermione went ...

Hey! Here to review! I love the emotion in this piece. I can litterally feel the anger comming off the computer screen. You only wanted you r perfect son, but ...

Chapter One: “All glory comes from daring to begin” –Eugene F. Ware Present Day: August 24th Setting: Chiyoda-ku, Tokyo, Japan The night shadows covered the boy as he slipped into ...