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Re: Love is pain
Everybody bleeds Everybody cries Everybody dreams And everybody dies Don’t tell me it’s too hard Cause I know that a lie For me ............... I really like this part. Keep ...
May 10, 2009 -
Re: All is Not What It Seems
it's pretty good. I think you just have to check " Your" and change it to "you're". Also it seems to be a bit long. Maybe shorten it a bit?
May 10, 2009
