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Re: What makes us care?
It was pretty short, but that is okay. I see you have passion for this poem. That is why you wrote it, correct? Well, I'll tell you this much- I've ...
Mar 30, 2009 -
Re: Edward Cullen
The same things happen to me when I open up my book. Like I'm Bella. I wish I was Bella. *Sighs*. Anyway, I liked the poem. You explained everything so ...
Mar 30, 2009 -
Re: Blue Ocean Eyes
I don't know what to say. It was not some 'everyday poem'. I thought it was great, Dear. Well. There is really not much for me to say. Once again, ...
Mar 30, 2009 -
Re: The touch of a vampire
I liked it. It's was very romantic. At first. Then, it got personal. Knda got gross. I mean nobody puts that stuff in books. Nasty. Her is a way you ...
Mar 30, 2009 -
Re: hope
Dear, I absolutely loved it. But I have a few things I recommend. First, you need to capitalize 'I' and at the beginning of a sentence. Secondly, you need to ...
Mar 30, 2009 -
Re: For those lost souls..
I'm so sorry. It must be hard to miss someone you love.I can always be your friend here if you want. Anyway, I liked the poem. It was sweet. And ...
Mar 29, 2009 -
Re: Alone
Jesus Christ! My god, that is sad. I almost started crying. Your good at emotion in your poems. And I'm glade that this poem wasn't real. You have a way ...
Mar 29, 2009 -
Re: In a Sea Shell
It was very emotional. I love it. But I would make it a little longer. Sure, it is short, but I thought it was wonderful. I know this is a ...
Mar 29, 2009 -
Re: Invisible
I thought is was great. Honestly, you and I both know that most people are great poets. Well, Dear, there are a few things I'd like to suggest and correct. ...
Mar 29, 2009 -
Re: Life's Music
I'm a huge fan of classical music. It's so peaceful. So graceful. Just like this poem of yours. I loved it. It was getting right to the point. I like ...
Mar 29, 2009 -
Re: That Girl In The Mirror.
I don't know what to say. I loved it. In my perspective, you had no errors. Where did you learn such a way with words? I'm so not that good. ...
Mar 29, 2009 -
Re: For All the Murdered in the Cold Ground
Well,I don't know where to start. I liked it. It was wonderful, Dear. But you need to add a little more punctuation. I notice a few times, you didn't capitalize ...
Mar 29, 2009 -
Re: You kept me alive
Well Hello!!! I think that was great. But did you get that idea from Twilight? Were you inspired by Twilight? Your words are so like Stephie Meyer's words. I would ...
Feb 14, 2009 -
Re: What's Your Internet Connection?
Well, I have Centurytel. Yep believe it. Haha. I'm feeling humorous today.
Feb 12, 2009 -
Re: photographs
Dear, I thoght they were great, you have quite of a future ahead of you. You were focusing on the small things that really mean so much to our planet. ...
Jan 3, 2009
