punkrockchick

Get the end edited again. The story's good but you're grammar isn't :? P.S: Thanks for mentioning I was the one who helped... :evil:

(My computer broke and I've been trying to work on the stuff people have said, so this is extremely late, also this is version two since I didn't like version ...

This is amazing. Here there are two amazing characters with a brilliant story to tell. P.S: Thanks for my review

This lived up to all of my expectations and more, I think I like the other one a little more, but that's just me. How can you not like this! ...

Wow, this is amazing! It's beautiful in an incredibly sad way. It's a kind of contradiction, I think. Since in the beginning, they're both so naive and innocent and full ...

(Hi, first off, I'd like to say that I'm twelve, not eleven - the computer messed up. Also I'm new to this so there's almost definitely a lot of mistakes ...

This is really good; there's nothing you can really say wrong with it. I love all the acting, and just the way you phrased everything - you can really imagine ...