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Re: A Stir of Shadows (an excerpt)
I can always count on you, Spork. :'D A s for the plot hole... it really isn't a plot hole. it's more like a poor choice of words on my ...
Dec 21, 2010 -
Re: The Melancholy Tale of Darren Everrest -- Prologue
I can honestly say I loved reading this right through into the end. Your imagery is beautiful, the narrator kept my interest, and your introduction kept me intrigued. Your ending ...
Dec 17, 2010 -
Re: A Stir of Shadows (an excerpt)
T his is an excerpt from a story my sister and I were collaborating on awhile ago. The idea has been partially dropped, but I'm so in love with the ...
Dec 17, 2010 -
Re: Blood Stains (From my novel)
I must say that I really enjoyed reading this. The only thing that turned me off a bit was the description about his mother's death, but that's just my own ...
Dec 17, 2010 -
Re: His, How-are-yous, and Salutations
Hiya Dino! :] Welcome to YWS! H i Spork! (: In love with writing, eh? I think you'll find yourself in like company here. So, when you're not experiencing a ...
Aug 23, 2010 -
Re: Summer Nights
Every year I go to South Carolina for a few weeks with my family, and every year I find myself writing a poem about what I experience. I have to ...
Aug 23, 2010 -
Re: His, How-are-yous, and Salutations
W hat's up? I'm Pulchritudinous, which according to means "a beautiful outer appearance". I don't have one of these, but I like the name anyway. O f course Pulchritudinous is ...
Aug 20, 2010 -
Re: When the world finally goes silent
C ongratulations! You're my first review! And my first praise, coincidentally. I really enjoyed this poem from beginning to end. Though it definitely could use a bit of tweaking, I ...
Aug 20, 2010
