pudin.junidf

Thanks a lot!!! :D :D

Laurie She took me to the forest again, thankfully I was still in my dirty dress so I didn't have to ruin one more. I was quite apprehensive abut what ...

[color=#BF00BF]Hey!! I'm Pudin!! So I haven't really reviewed lately, but I'm willing to do some now. I'll have four free days starting this Friday so I can make at least ...

Hi!! HOw are you? YOu can review this only if you want. its an extract from my novel (I have to admit, I like this part.) Here it is. BY ...

Hi!! So here is another story for your reviews, its called Red Vendetta and its actaully an extract from the novel I'm writing. Here it is.

This...was wicked cool, empress!! I'm loving your story. YOu have such incredible descriptions and Mimi's character is awesome; the imagery you created was outstanding you really get the reader inside

I continued following Sar until we reached outside the house and we stoppped laughing. I was tired, in all ways, my mind could nno longer hold in place the bubble ...

HI!! Pudin Here!!! I'll be honest, this seemed more for lyrics than for poem. It's good though, I liked it though in a way. Some nitpicks. Is it possible, for ...

HI!! Welcome to YWS!! I hope you enjoy your time here!! If you need anythng just PM me , if you need a review I'm just a Pm away.

Gabrielle "What are you doing here?" She asked Max in a cold tone. "Oh, nothing, will you try to kill me? She said mockingly with a half smile on her ...

This is an extract from my novel. The main character and her boy. Please check, review, correct, and leave your comments. Rated PG-13. Thanks for helping. ************************ I was standing ...

Artemis She was quite, very quite, eagerly watching a big hawk as it flew above her and with one swift movement of her hand, she let the arrow out of ...

Gabrielle Dawson. I was dressing in a black minidress and black tights and boots. My whole apartment seemed suitable for a kill. It was dark, with only a small glint ...

Ok. Helping Kat!! Jackie Ok, that was too much Iclisa was acing like a totally wild animal, punching and hitting people, making peole blee. Beth and Violet had gone to ...

Hey Kat!! this is so beautiful, I love your rhyme and how the poem flows so easily. This is so good, I'm so proud of being your student. I don't ...