pudin.junidf

Hey!! I save a spot

Taylor Chatah, or I have to say Charlie, wandered off, looking for his guitar. It had been a while since I last played guitar and that made me realize that ...

Lillith Hunting, drinking that fresh blood had been good,motivating even. So when I went back to the dinner place, my strength was fully restored, but my roommate was not there. ...

Taylor He went back to the tribe with Fallon, listening as she gave extremely strong footsteps on the damps ground. For some reason he was glad he was back, at ...

Lillith - at the dinner place- I was there, sitting next to a girl named Alvi who thankfully was a vampire,and was as well, roomed up with a human. At ...

Thanks Chup! I'll edit my post

Taylor He wasn't very fond of hunting but if he had to do it, then he would surely do it; afterall, he was raised to do so even if he ...

9/10 it's hilarious.

Hey Kat!! Well, nice start, the poem was beautiful, how you described everything was beautiful, you rhythm was really good. Your wording was beautiful too. Ok so for the theme, ...

Stephan I wondered what was wrong with this dude but it might have sounded a little off, if I asked him, so I stayed silent. The dorm room was quite ...

Hey Baboon!! I liked your piece, but I'm running out of time now, so I promise I'll review this later. XOXO Pudin

Hey!! So, I liked your story, your character especially it gives a special touch to the story. There was lots of dialogue which is good especially because you knew how ...

Hey Pandora!! So since I guess this was one of the first things you wrote I'll be honest, really honest. First of all you mentioned that the story had to ...

8/10 The dress that the girl has is cool and funny.

Hey again Ofir!! I like it, I like the changes you made, especially how you described her with her twelve different smiles and her dislike towards the freckles she had. ...