pudin.junidf

Hi Trish!! Can you please review this for me? Is the first part of my story called Bye For Now. thanks for your help.

Hey AM! can you please review this for me? It's called Bye for Now, but it's only the first part. thanks so much for your help.

Hey Ballerina!! Welcome to YWS!! How are you? So seems like you've already introduced yourself, so I'm Pudin, YOu can call me Pudin or Juni. So You like ballet?! I ...

Totally over those, now some more, please I'm starving!! Please, more reviews!!

So this is a story I made for a contest. Tell me what you think, please. ---------------------------------------------------------------- Life, what is life but a thin thread meant but a thin thread ...

Daniel. It was late in the afternoon when he stopped working and finally sat down in one of the chairs in the small kitchen. He noticed Krissy had avoided him ...

Hey Young Gun!! Sorry for the delay, but here I am now!! First of all, I have got to say, that I loved it. I liked how you dealt with ...

Hello!! Pudin here with the requested review. So, let's start. To be honest, I didn't understand it which leads to the conclusion that I quite don't like it. Why? Because ...

Hello again airbear!! Here is your second review. First of all, this was very beautiful. Your description was excellent, you gave us such a clear image that it seemed almost ...

I can't really say anything but she's really pretty, her scars are barely noticeable though.

Hey airbear!! First of all, i would like to say I'm sorry for such delay! But I enjoyed this. Wow, it was what I really needed. This was incredible very ...

***looks at the showers** finally!! ***but spots maple syrup with chocolate ice cream before***Cool!! ***throws it at Irish and Shadow who's in the showers***

Avaline The things had calmed down when we reached a picnic table to the far east shore of the lake. I felt good, very easy going. "So what should we ...

Lorraine I really didn't really want to get into this, but I had to and I was willing to do it. It was a hard situation, but If I had ...

Some more, please!!!! ***Dies*** :thud: