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Re: Bearable
Hey Kat!! I'll review your piece, I'm a little rusty so please excuse me if I say something quite out of place. So first of all, I really liked your ...
Jul 19, 2011 -
Re: New Roommate
hey there!! I'll review your work today, I'm a little rusty so please excuse me. =) So the idea is very interesting, and you are right, meeting your new roommate ...
Jul 19, 2011 -
Re: Broken Pieces. Prologue
She walked down the aisle slowly, gracefully, almost as if she was walking on thin air. One step, and stop; one step and stop; her dress followed her obediently. The ...
Jul 19, 2011 -
Re: Mischief Managed: Saying "Until Next Time" To Harry
This was brilliant, that's all I can say about it, it was brilliant and the wording was so beautiful. I agree with you, I grew up with the Harry Potter ...
Jul 17, 2011 -
Re: Hold onto your hats everyone, because...
Crocky!! Oh my God!! Welcome back, it has been so long!!! *huggles* We've missed you!
Apr 9, 2011 -
Re: The Candlestone
Save a spot for a girl and a boy. Will have character profiles later.
Aug 18, 2010 -
Re: Need A Review? (Updated)
Hey Nightowl!! Could you review this for me please? It's called blood in the sunrise.
Aug 18, 2010 -
Re: Bring it on! (Open)
Hey Shub!! So I was wondering if you could review this for me please. I's called Blood in the Sunrise Thanks you very much.
Aug 18, 2010 -
Re: Feed The Pink Elephant! [Open!]
Hey Pink Could you review this for me please? It called Blood in the Sunrise . Thanks very much!
Aug 18, 2010 -
Re: Blood in the Sunrise-Part I
Blood in the Sunrise I watched them come in starless night, with their bright red skirts and orange skirts swaying with the cold wind. They walked slowly, carefully, marching to ...
Aug 18, 2010 -
Re: Atlantic Prep
Hey Hockeyfan!! Well, to be honest this was good, you have an interesting idea going on here, but it didn't really catch my attention. It's a really small piece and ...
Aug 4, 2010 -
Re: Family Problems
Hey Retro!! Well first of all I want to tell you that this was really good, I really liked it. It was quite cruel but really good. I liked how ...
Aug 4, 2010 -
Re: Change One Letter [2]
flip
Aug 4, 2010 -
Re: Blue Flames and Bloodshot Eyes (Chapter 1)
Hey Razzker!! Well, this was a good read, I liked it, the whole vampire thing was really good (I'm quite biased because I'm a vampire fan). I found your story ...
Aug 4, 2010 -
Re: So Many Memories.... Aren't There?
Hey bcain! This is a really good story, I liked it, it was romantic and it was sad. Towards the end, I swear my heart was already broker by the ...
Aug 4, 2010
