pudin.junidf

So since most are girls I think I'll have a boy character. Name:Race Ashford Age: 17 Personality:Really quite, but funny and adventurous, mysterious and not very open to everyone. He ...

hey Zoe! I'll review your piece today. To be honest, as sick as that might seem, I loved it. It was really well written and you portrayed all her feelings ...

Hey Horselover! I'll review your piece again. So, what I like about your pieces is the intrigue that you create around that voice and how interesting it seems for the ...

hey! I'll review your piece today. It was nice, a good start I have to say. The intrigue that you created around the voice was really nice, it keeps us ...

Ariel She couldn't belive Garred, what was the point? She thought he knew her more than that. Not even if it risked her life, she wouldn't ever in her life ...

Hey Kat! What's up? So I don't have much to say now. But I think this piece is lacking a bit of characterization. The piece is short, yeah, but it ...

Banned for being from the land of dead zombies.

Being in a computer all day is really boring when there is nothing to do

Ariel Holes in the ground, narrow trail, walls everywhere.Oh no! it was happening, her hands started to sweat and get cold. Her head began spinning but thankfully not to fast ...

Hey Zoray! I'll review your piece today. Well, there's a lot of work to do in this piece. First of all, I think the story itself is not that interesting. ...

Hey Aqua! I'll review your piece today. So...this is really well written and interesting. I like the originality of the piece and how you managed to keep the reader's attention ...

Elliot-Demon Florence, was it possible? France now Florence. It didn't seem as if they were looking for vampires, it seemed as if they were in some kind of romantic cruise ...

Ariel-witch It was awesome, almost unbelievable for someone to pick humanity over death. Well, it was Garred and even when she knew it must have been a hard decision, she ...

Hey Ash! What's up? I liked your piece, It is beautiful and...epic, really epic! As Demi said, you were setting the background and the important information for your story Let ...

Hey GAM! What's up? So this piece is a lot better, maybe because you let us into the character's mind and feel what they were feeling. I liked the starting, ...