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Re: Greetings People
Hey Kevin! Welcome to YWS! Nice to meet You! I'm Pudin or Juni, you can call me either of them. So Star Wars, huh? The best movies ever! I liked ...
Jan 30, 2010 -
Re: The watermelon
Hey Rain! I'll review your story today! Well, I have to say that this was, by far, the mos interesting story I've read in a long while and to be ...
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Re: Deadly Secrets- Prologue
Hey Kate! I'll review your story today! So wow! this was short! To be honest it was almost too short to do a proper review due the lack of in-depth ...
Jan 30, 2010 -
Re: Ignore this
Hey Molly! I'll be your reviewer today! So let's begin. First of all, I have to say that you have some great talent going on. I really like your style ...
Jan 30, 2010 -
Re: Camp Hillbay
So I save a spot for a boy and a girl
Jan 30, 2010 -
Re: Imortality
It rather depends, depends on the situation and with whom I would share. An eternity of loneliness would suck.
Jan 30, 2010 -
Re: Fear...then Death
Hey Princess! I'll review your story today! So, first of all I have to say that this is pretty small, and that's kinda obvious isn't it? This is a setback ...
Jan 30, 2010 -
Re: hello everyone
Hey Dragonet! Welcome to YWS! Nice to meet you! I'm Pudin! Wow, you must be great, because I can't write a novel with three words! So congrats! And don't worry ...
Jan 29, 2010 -
Re: Hello, and how may I help you?
Hi Lav! Welcome to YWS!! It's nice to meet you! I'm Pudin or Juni! Wow, everything you've accomplished is so spectacular! Being published? You definitely have to talk about that ...
Jan 29, 2010 -
Re: How was your day?
My day! well to be honest it sucks. I'm sick and I have to study for my Geography test on Monday so...I'm pretty much depressed. :(
Jan 29, 2010 -
Re: Hey everyone! :)
Hey Darien! Welcome to YWS! It is so very nice to meet you! Well, I'm Juni, but everyone calls me Pudin here. So let's check... flute and guitar...yes! Poems...yes! write ...
Jan 29, 2010 -
Re: Sheild Maiden
Hey Shine! I'll review your story today. Nice storyline, really nice you've got an interesting idea going on here. Maybe if you expand it a bit more and give us ...
Jan 29, 2010 -
Re: Moonstrike, Chapter Two (revised)
Hey Spiral! I'm here again. To be honest I didn't like this one as much as I liked the other one. This one seemed pretty dull and quite useless. I ...
Jan 29, 2010 -
Re: MoonStrike: Chapter 1 (Revised)
hey Dark Spiral! I'll review this today! To be honest, I liked it, your writing is pretty good. Unfortunately I haven't read the original, unedited piece so I can't really ...
Jan 29, 2010 -
Re: Silent (searching for a better name.)
Hey Little Pet! I loved your story, you have an amazing talent, I loved how you placed everything in the story and how you described it, but I love the ...
Jan 29, 2010
