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Re: The Riders - Prologue (Re-Draft)
Hey Lydia! Well, I have to say that this was god, well written, I didn't read the unedited post so I can't really see the changes and improvements but I ...
Feb 1, 2010 -
Re: Living with the Devil
Hey ofir! I'll review your story today! So here I go! Well, I have to say I liked it, I liked your hook. Those first too sentences really did make ...
Feb 1, 2010 -
Re: The Hideaway
Hey Drago! I'll review your story today! Well, I have to say that this was too short, but it was ok. I liked how you kept it mysterious and kept ...
Feb 1, 2010 -
Re: The Loving Ghost
Hey Anchees! I'll review your story today. First of all, I have to say that I really liked it. I liked the story itself, I mean the structure and the ...
Feb 1, 2010 -
Re: Delicious Destruction
save a spot for a boy and girl!
Feb 1, 2010 -
Re: The World: Pluto Kiss.
Sakura It all started out dark and began clearing out as she ran. In what level was she? oh yeah, 48. How could she have forgotten?! well, maybe it was ...
Feb 1, 2010 -
Re: Camp Hillbay
Evangeline. Besides the slight interaction she had with Dari yesterday, she spent the next hours locked up in her cabin. Breakfast was ok for her, at least it made her ...
Feb 1, 2010 -
Re: Invisible Words
yay, thanks! Name:Gabrielle Ainsworth Age: 17 Gender: Female Personality:She's really funny and likes hanging out with her friends. She's really outspoken and likes to have some attention although not
Jan 31, 2010 -
Re: The World: Pluto Kiss.
Name: Sakura Age:16 Appearance: Eye Colour- her eyes are a mixture of different colors. The colors are in stripes surrounded by big coal black eyelashes. the color is something like ...
Jan 31, 2010 -
Re: Invisible Words
I'm in! can I have two characters?
Jan 31, 2010 -
Re: Angel to be,still thinking of a better name!
Hi Dazzle! I'll review your story today. Well, first of all I have to say that it was an interesting piece, It's a very nice start for the story. IN ...
Jan 31, 2010 -
Re: Camp Hillbay
Evangeline Yeah, it was going to be a whole new experience for her since she wasn't really used to been out of the city. She considered herself a total city ...
Jan 31, 2010 -
Re: Camp Hillbay
so here are my profiles. Name:Evangeline Adler Gender: famale Age:16 Picture: Personality:she's really funny but shy, that's a problem for her because she loves being around people but is to ...
Jan 31, 2010 -
Re: Im New
Hey Kassy! What's up?! Welcome to YWS and nice to meet you! I'm Pudin or Juni, you can call me both. So journalism is such an interesting and exciting thing ...
Jan 30, 2010 -
Re: Introduction
Hey Drago! What's up?! Welcome to YWS and nice to meet you! I'm Juni or Pudin you can call me both. So you read when you were six?! Wow, you ...
Jan 30, 2010