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Hey Demi! Can you review this for me please? Is under Lyric Poetry and its called Little Missy Thanks so much

Hey Sionarama! I'll review your poem today! So this is really nice, quite original for a Valentine's day and quite creepy too. I'm a little rusty in poetry since I ...

Hey Winter! I'll review this today! Well, first of all, I loved it! I really did! It was very realistic. I liked your prologue a lot. Most of the time, ...

Hi Pretty Crazy! I'll review this today! Well, this was so very cute! I loved it. It has great potential, and it was nicely developed. I like your style, which ...

Hi Alenka! I'll review this today! I' have to say that you have some interesting ideas going on but the problem was that they weren't well developed. The whole darkness ...

Sakura Yes, she was awfully tied, but she just couldn't stop. Killing monsters was now her hobby, it really did entertain her, in the sickest of ways of course. So ...

Aidan He looked over at Diana, the girl who had helped him the other day. she seemed nice and a bit too eager to be with them, not that he ...

Hey Gal! So, I'm here, finally! So, first of all I have to say that your poetry is exquisite and you have a great talent. I like this poem, I ...

Hey Amy! Could you please review this for me? It's Lyric Poetry and it's called Little Missy Thanks so much

Hi Rascal! Could you please review this? It's under Lyric Poetry and it's called Little Missy

Hey Wd! Thanks so much for the last review! Do you think you can review this? It's in Lyric Poetry and it called Little Missy

Hey Matt! I'll review your poem today! I have to admit I'm a little rusty on poetry but here I go. This is good, your rhythm is good. If I ...

He: Hello, little girl, the sun has risen today with a new colorful shade. The wind is blowing with a sweet embrace. Little girl, will you see the beauty behind ...

Hey Kit! I'll review this today! First of all, I have to say bravo! I liked it, even when there were part that were confusing. Well not your fault.lol. So ...

Hey Radid! I'll review this today! I'll point out some things I noticed. 1. Your hook it's quite interesting because it begins with dialogue but the story just went from ...