pudin.junidf

HAHAHA!!!!! I love this twilight parodies, they're the best. This one was sick, I totally loved it. I can't review, i'ts was way tooo funny to check any mistakes or ...

HAHA!! Awesome. That was wicked cool!! you should right some more about it, it's so awfully funny. great parody!!! YOu've got a cool imagination. Write some more about,plz. (if you ...

You have an outstanding imagination. I read your other story and both of them are beautifully written. In this one, though, i felt that things happened tooo fast. And I ...

I liked it. I really like this fantasy stories they have that mistery and suspense around the whole fantay world. Second. is this all? because it is really good.just some ...

Hello!! this is the next part of the story i never finished writing, I'll continue posting what I have of it,which is not much. So please comment, review,check please. ***** ...

Umm...I liked it, but...bit wakward. I think everyine has told you the same thing about the whip, but i have to say it too. What's with the whip and knife? ...

I liked it. But the principal character, bella, is such an idiot, she's always like "you die I die, you live I live." And she's so sexually needy, she talks ...

wow, this was extremely helpful and it made me understand that i have to let my characters live (they come to me at school, in Bible class) but i usually ...

hi. THNKS. and yeah, I know,cliche. Everyone writes about that. THNKS for reviewing it, i really needed it. And thnks for saying that my dark-somehow-emo poem has potential :lol:

Hi!! I love your description of the place,of the peace that surrounded everything and the silence that reigned over the night. Then how everything changed, was incredible,how suddenly everything came ...

Hi! i really liked the story, is very interesting and fun. I loved the characters. They were different but they somehow complemented each other, i mean sam is allperky while ...

thanks for the review and the advice, I really neede it, didn't i? Thanks for the tips, too. And i'll try to improve my writing,lol. I think the other one ...

It's kind of trashy i know,is the first "novel" attempt i ever did. It's probably not as good as i would have liked, but we learn fro our mistakes, dont ...

Hello!!! well, this was my first attempt at writing.plz dont be too harsh. And as i always say, comment, review, and correct if necessary,plz. **** **** “Hurry, we are going ...

Hello!!! well, this was my first attempt at writing.plz dont be too harsh. And as i always say, comment, review, and correct if necessary,plz. **** **** “Hurry, we are going ...