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Re: Red Vendetta part 2. (unknown) please review.
Hi! so this is the second part of the story called "unknown". You may read the first part if you want, I would recommend it since it gives a better ...
Jul 29, 2009 -
Re: A story that I am writing that currently has no name Pt 1.
Hi,Morgan. It's incredible that I read this today but it was today that I found it. You are a writer and I'm a junior so,these are just some of the ...
Jul 29, 2009 -
Re: Until .
Hi!! it was good, but quite common. I've notice you like rhymes, but sometimes rhymes don't fit in your poem and sometimes when you look for a word that rhymes ...
Jul 29, 2009 -
Re: Vegetarian vampires
Hi!! I'm pudin. Well, the vegetarian vampires thing is "in", so everyone will like a story about vegetarian vampires as long as the vampires are flawless, beautiful, with shining skin ...
Jul 29, 2009 -
Re: Ami .
I totally loved it, it was very good, very descriptive. Your poetry is very good, this poem was awesome. I didn't just like one line I liked the whole poem. ...
Jul 29, 2009 -
Re: Together & Apart - Chapter One
wow. unexpected, really unexpected. The story was interesting but I think everything went on too fast. Second I thought Rebecca liked boys and suddenly she's making out with Britney!! Then ...
Jul 29, 2009 -
Re: Vindicated
I really like it,it's awsome. How the story was neatly developed, and the events are nicely describes. I would heve liked to know a little more about Anna's appearance. Yhen ...
Jul 28, 2009 -
Re: Books, and why we dislike the films!
that's true, sometimesthe movies are not as good as the books, well that happens most of the time. And at least for me, it's very disappointing because it ruins my ...
Jul 28, 2009 -
Re: The clone
Hi!! THis is a small story I had to do for homework. All i can tell you is that i had to make up a myth. So please, read, review, ...
Jul 27, 2009 -
Re: Boarding School: The Next Generation
HI I like to change something from character, well, she was supposed to be in 11th, but eleven is way too high for me so I'll just stick to tenth. ...
Jul 27, 2009 -
Re: You're Not Perfect
pretty!! I really liked it. well, you already know I love your story,there were some mistakes though. Your spelling was good this time. And why did he feel the need ...
Jul 26, 2009 -
Re: Boarding School: The Next Generation
I'm a new memeber, I hope that my character is good enough Name: Jacqueline Alice Conway (jackie) Age: 15 Grade:11 Gender: Female Physical Appearance: -Nationality: American -Height: 5'5 -Weight: 110 ...
Jul 26, 2009 -
Re: I am...not
HI again. This is a poem I did this year. And as I always say,read, comment, check, review, correct if necessary. I'd really like some help with this poem. (It's ...
Jul 26, 2009 -
Re: Do you prefer to type your stories or write them by hand?
Well,it definitely depends. Because if i get a great idea, let's say at school, I grab a notebook and pencil and start writing, when i get home I rewrite it ...
Jul 26, 2009 -
Re: You're Not Perfect
I totally loved it!!!!!! There were like a thousand mistakes but the story was wicked awesome. The descriptions,everything. The story was so good, that I want to read more about ...
Jul 25, 2009
