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Re: Boarding School: The Next Generation
Jackie As soon as Avaline and I reached the lobby, the light went out and the storm was awful; creating so much noise that it burned my eardrum. Great , ...
Aug 8, 2009 -
Re: Feed Me Poe-tree! [accepting]
Hey I'm Pudin!! I'd really appreciate if you could review this one and tell what's right and what's wrong. thanks Pudin
Aug 8, 2009 -
Re: Boarding School: The Next Generation
I followed Avaline to where she was standin next to the elavator. We were about to get in when we saw Ilisa and Cornelia coming in with their clothes all ...
Aug 8, 2009 -
Re: Realm of Reflection
Hello, Shina!! it's Pudin intresting idea, I read it today (obviously, I always read things late. lol) I like the idea because it's so very clear and I would like ...
Aug 7, 2009 -
Re: Last Angel: Beyond good and evil
Cool, I really liked it it's different. The whole heaven and hell thing is awesome. Great start, the story was so very interesting. It even made me laugh withtthat archangel ...
Aug 7, 2009 -
Re: Young Romance
Hello!! this is a well written piece, it has its flaws but it's a nice beggining. The story was somehow cute but there was very little decription about the characters ...
Aug 7, 2009 -
Re: Boarding School: The Next Generation
Jackie Avaline walked toward us witha huge grin. And I ran towad her until we met midways. Brennan was following me with his weird ferret with him. i turned to ...
Aug 6, 2009 -
Re: --Ivy Academy for Gifted Boys and Girls--
I said bye to Beth and went out of the room. There was too much noise in the dinner tables but I decided togo and find a lonely table for ...
Aug 6, 2009 -
Re: --Ivy Academy for Gifted Boys and Girls--
Everyone was going to dinner with Violet, she was popular and cute. I wasn't, or at least they though that. I noticed Lucas and his sister going. I so wanted ...
Aug 6, 2009 -
Re: Palm Tree.
Hello Jess!! Interesting picture. A palm tree in black and white? Definetely different, remembering a dark summer. The picture's nice, a bit small though. And like Abigail said, the other ...
Aug 6, 2009 -
Re: Anorexic Letters
Hey!! This is very sentimental, the words you chose were very simple and yet the poem makes a statement. You described the hard road of a wrong mental image. I ...
Aug 6, 2009 -
Re: --Ivy Academy for Gifted Boys and Girls--
Evangeline. **Summer is Evangeline allowed to have a crush?*** I stood next to violet already gatting a bit annoyed by her forever changing hair color although it was fun to ...
Aug 6, 2009 -
Re: Boarding School: The Next Generation
jackie ***lol. hey sorry, I misunderstood it, so Brennan is the one with the ferret*** We went to look for Avaline,but she was no where to be seen. We circled ...
Aug 6, 2009 -
Re: Boarding School: The Next Generation
I cried until my eyes hurt.I wasn't suppose to be here so early in the morning crying all alone. But I was. I got up from where I was and ...
Aug 6, 2009 -
Re: Worst Book You've Ever Read
OK, so one of the worst books I've read is Eldest(the second book in the inheritance series) and a book that I think only one person knows about it and ...
Aug 6, 2009
