pudin.junidf

Hi Irish!! Cool story!! It's interesting that you have three older brothers and sisters. HOw is life with them? jajajaj, its so nice you have so much friends, no joke ...

Claire Jhonson- happy one- power negation After all, my poor good old friend Jazz had to go to detention once more. I looked back to the whiteboard and tried to ...

I imagine them as real people. It is way easier for me to describe them and give them traits and habits and eventaully have a conversation with them on my ...

Hi!! This is poem is nice, very likeable. I like it, very nice for a begginer. it flows nicely, and some of the rhyme does sound good and flows naturally ...

Avaline. "NO fair" I growled, " then , I'll start speaking French and je ne suis pas gringa" we all laughed. "Frenchy" he said in between laughs, bu this Frenchy ...

That's so cool, my favorite actor of the golden age in HOllywood is Montgomety Cliff, Elizabeth Taylor, Katherine Hepburne was so cool!! It's so nice to meet you and I ...

Hi!! Thanks so musch for the review, Roon. It is really cool that you liked my poem, thanks so much!! Pudin

Name: Laurie Age:(345) 16 Gender:Female Personality:She's happry and likes helping people. She is very irritable though and doesn't like when things are not taken seriously. She is very friendly and ...

Avaline A girl named Mary joined us at lunch. She was onbviously latin and she had short hair and darker skin that seemed to be almost a chocolate color. She ...

HI!! I'm finally here and out of homeworks. This is an excellent written piece. As weird as it may sound to some people who doesn't appreciate horror, I'm in love ...

Hey Empress!! Pudin here!! It's so cool that you love yourself as you are!! So you like Victorian Rock? I like rock but a little more heavy, actually a lot ...

HI!! Jess, I'm so sorry I dind't get this earlier, but no I'm here. I like how your story is turning out, pretty good. BUt I still think it needs ...

oh, and by the way, thanks for the other ones. Pudin

HI empress!1 Pudin here! So I liked your story it has lots of potential. Iwould like to read more. I have to admit, that I like this kind of stories. ...

Hi silly!! YOur poem is nice, it has potential but i still think it can be better. There were times when the flow was interrupted, and sometimes your rhyme sounded ...