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Granted, but now you're so motivated you never stop working and you die from exhaustion. I wish it was May 30th(graduation day for me) already!!!

Banned for walking in dreams.

But why not be a Duke?

Done! Feel free to request more reviews! :D (I love your signature!)

I think SmylinG took care of all of the spelling and grammar mistakes that I saw, so on to my evaluation of the content. I really enjoyed it. It's interesting, ...

The only real problem I see is the line "Or maybe it's town". As the others above me have said, I think you meant to say 'the town' or 'this ...

:D My first request! I have done one already, but your other work is catching my eye. I'll definitely be checking it out when I have more time.

The organization seems a little choppy, but it works. The content is amazing. Overall I really like it. Like the comment above me indicates, I would avoid the use of ...

I would love to review something for you guys!I usually review spelling, grammar, and content. I am open to reviewing novels, poetry, lyrics, and fanfiction. The only genre I don't ...

Would you mind reviewing a preview of a Science Fiction Novel I'm working on?

Completely false, I'm addicted to the stuff. TPBM is allergic to bee stings.

Definitely true. I love animals, and I would love to talk to them. TPBM's favorite character on NCIS is Ducky!

I can't think of any improvements that can be made, so I'll skip to what I like. It flows easily, and really catches your attention. The content is just amazing. ...

Wow, just wow! This is amazing, and brutally honest. I normally don't read long poems, but once I started reading this I just couldn't stop. I can't think of anything ...

Do you have a family?