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cool, I look forward to it.

oops, I was trying to write a review, not a comment

First let me say that this was really well written, and kept my attention from beginning to end, so congratulations on writing such an impressive piece! In any case, there's ...

thanks for the review!

yep, next chapter should be up tomorrow, but I'm running out of points, need anything reviewed?

yeah, about the whole accent thing, my thought was that he was eight when they took him, so he still had the accent, but because of stockholm syndrom and assimilation ...

i have four or five more chapters that i expect to post when i get more points. until then why not read my halloween contest entry? btw, you might consider ...

I apologize for that, and i hope now it's in pieces that are a little more bite sized. feel free to comment on the individual chapters now...