prolixity

Thanks for the review! I liked your interpretation of it. Actually, it's based on my actual family and my grandpa's death. It's interesting you suggested having them scatter the ashes. ...

Thanks! You're right about the ellipses. I never even noticed them. I guess I wasn't going for pauses so much as a whining tone. So I'll have to work on ...

Thanks for the review. :)

Oh no, my quotes got messed up. :( Sorry.

Thanks for the review! It was really helpful. I know what you mean about the names. That's my biggest issue with this piece, I think. Too many people in too ...