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Since I don't know anything about Mina, except that she's "average," I can't say which name fits the best. They all seem perfectly fine. I would say that Mina Green ...

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I don't think the number of reviews you get has anything to do with how new you are, or how "popular." Sometimes it just takes a while for people to ...

I quickly read your short story and I don't think it lacks creativity. It has some other issues, and maybe I can get around to reviewing it later. I don't ...

I know you said you don't like it, but I actually like Running With the Dead the best! The others sound a little clichéd to me. I like Here Come ...

Well, I don't write novels or medieval fiction or poetry, but I could try. I think a rhyme scheme might improve it... make it sound more prophesy-like or whatever. Also, ...