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7/10 The doll is interesting, but the awkward grammar is distracting. The dust was from ages ago? The windowsill? That doesn't really make sense. I would say "had sat collecting ...
Jul 11, 2012
7/10 The doll is interesting, but the awkward grammar is distracting. The dust was from ages ago? The windowsill? That doesn't really make sense. I would say "had sat collecting ...
Jul 11, 2012
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