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Re: At the End of the Hall
I agree with Snoweary. Instead use- Sighing with relief, i cuddle... the story is well written.
Oct 23, 2011 -
Re: Have you ever wondered?
It is good. I can feel your emotions in the poem
Oct 23, 2011 -
Re: A Traffic Accident
You didn't show smoke
Oct 23, 2011