prideofwords

ur poetry is very simple...... and sounds good..... i like the way u've expressed ur love.... whomever it implies for is lucky..... :D keep going...... keep writing.......

hi ..... i'm new to YWS..... and about ur poem..... well.... the rhythm was really good.... and i liked the mood of the poetry ..... at first i thought your ...

Away from the world The worlds pace is fast Faster than ever It goes fast into fakeness People walk in the name of world They make this ‘world’ The sky ...

hi .... i'm new to YWS..... and abt ur poetry.,.... well its really good.... it did seem a little vague though.... i had a feeling tht u cud hv given ...