prepareyourself2

This is pretty good. I like the characterization you used here, and how you make Nora's personality distinct. However, I can't help but feel that you're introducing too many characters ...

This is a very nice glimpse of the past. It's a very vibrant story, and the imagery is very good. However, the characterization is strange here. Seven seems too young ...

This is a really nice poem. I especially like the imagery you used and the flow of the poem is great as well. To be honest, I was a bit ...