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Re: Life Chapter 1
This is pretty good. I like the characterization you used here, and how you make Nora's personality distinct. However, I can't help but feel that you're introducing too many characters ...
Apr 21, 2010 -
Re: Lost
This is a very nice glimpse of the past. It's a very vibrant story, and the imagery is very good. However, the characterization is strange here. Seven seems too young ...
Apr 21, 2010 -
Re: Hi!
Thanks lavabubblingout and Skins! It's niec to meet you guys. And, really, there's a blog section? I haven't found that yet. Well, it definitely sounds fun. I'll have to go ...
Apr 21, 2010 -
Re: Hi!
Hi guys. I'm another new member, and it's really great to be here! I'm prepareyourself2 but I'd prefer to be called Spera. I'm 13 years old, love writing and doodling, ...
Apr 20, 2010 -
Re: To Live For
This is a really nice poem. I especially like the imagery you used and the flow of the poem is great as well. To be honest, I was a bit ...
Apr 20, 2010 -
Re: Welcome New Members! [2]
Um, hi! It's nice to meet you guys. Well, my username is obviously prepareyourself2 but I prefer to be called Spera, which is my nickname in real life. So... nice ...
Apr 20, 2010
