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Re: 2.12.10-Valentines Day and Sucky Things
You are very entertaining. Your train of thought is similar to mine. Anyways, so I feel kind of weird posting a reply on your journal entry. Hope you don't mind! ...
Feb 14, 2010 -
Re: A new home, A new Love ( ch 3 p2)
Wow, so I really like your style. Its fast paced and witty. I especially appreciated your opening statement. I coughed badly in the thick smoke and fell to the floor ...
Feb 14, 2010 -
Re: The Day I met Him
"Your parents drive past the bus stop everyday on their way to work." He wisely answered. "Oh." I replied. Remember when a new person talks to add a new paragraph. ...
Feb 14, 2010 -
Re: Aberrant Romance - 2
CHAPTER TWO "Wow, so you actually got in huh?" James said while we were at our lockers. "Yeah, guess so. It's uh, going to be different. That's for sure." I ...
Feb 14, 2010 -
Re: The Dream
I walk down my street, love songs pounding in my head through my earbuds. I kick an old Dr. Pepper can, following it and eventually picking it up and stuffing ...
Feb 13, 2010 -
Re: Aberrant Romance - 1
Memo: I am really into this idea that I have right now. I'm very pleased with it too. However, you you are against what I am writing about (subject matter, ...
Feb 13, 2010 -
Re: late, one night
"No one to interupt this important task" --- I wouldn't have put this in the dialogue. It's a more matter of fact tone and I bet you're aiming for a ...
Feb 13, 2010
