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Remember: Its going fast because its a short story.

She felt him, he was warm, but he wasn't touching her. He leaned up against the truck along with her, making her shift over a little to give him more ...

Wow, I really like your diction here. The way you use your words, its great! She could run now, try to escape. Of course, with over humanly strength, she could ...

Good start, definitely worth continuing. It was a warm spring day. I was wearing a light blue t-shirt and gray short shorts. My wavy dark brown hair was pulled into ...

Sorry for all the weird tense changes! I will be going through all my other chapters to fix them all.

CHAPTER FOUR Everything was backwards in Britain. The way the people pronounced their vowels, and the the way they drove. It was different, and the change was almost agitating, but ...

Note: This is once again another short of that I have thought of. I REALLY should be doing my homework right now... but that's no fun(: Attraction and the Bad ...

The setting and current situation sounds a bit like the Holocaust. However, it was really interesting. I think that you should place it in Russia, actually. For some reason the ...

Oh this sounds good! I can't wait for your first chapter to come out. I just noticed one thing: I said, kicking a leaf and hearing the noise of cement ...

Note: I'm not sure if I should develop a narrative out of this, but I knew I needed to write it out. I only use names once, and I also ...

This is really good. Lengthy, but captivating. You have a habit of using fragments, I can tell. That's alright, J.D. Sallenger uses them too. But be sure to use them ...

1st period: Play a “get to know each other” game. 2nd period: Explain rules & expectations for future reference. 3rd period: Mr. Smith’s class has challenged us to play kickball ...

CHAPTER THREE The car right to the airport made me nauseous. Cecilia was sitting in the back seat with me as my father drove. I glanced over at her to ...

I'm not sure if you understand how good you are. I beg you to not ignore this talent.

Slam! Kaylin woke with a start as a door slammed shut. We already know the door slammed shut, try using a different word. Then, without warning, he backhanded her…hard. If ...