possibleintrovert

NOTE: THIS IS A POEM BASED ON THE ANGLO-SAXON STYLE LITERATURE. I have seen many winters, some of great joy, some of many tears. It is this winter, that causes ...

Ugh, don't listen to these people who say it's too long and draggy. Obviously they haven't read any substantial literature. Anyways, this makes perfect sense to me. As a writer, ...

Mrs. Bakes slid the white sheet of paper upside down on my desk as she breezed down the rows distributing tests. I cautiously flipped over the paper, nervous to discover ...

July 9th, 2010 I have a secret that I absolutely cannot tell anybody, except you of course. That's why I started this journal, so I can spill my secrets to ...

I ran up the ramp towards the automatic doors and waited impatiently for the two second time period for the sensor to acknowledge my presence and allow me inside. "You're ...

First off I really like this. I thought your tone to be melancholy and dreary which I loved! Near her head is a wild violet, straining in the throes of ...

Ahhhh I love this! Anyways, I just have a few things: I don't like how you mentioned the parents' names since they were so irrelevant to the story. "Yeah, why?" ...

It was quite a rush to see him waking up so she lit up another cigar and started smoking; after all, it was the only way in which she could ...

I like it actually. I think that you should add a little more description. Make me feel her fear and confusion. Make me feel like I'm also being gagged. Sorry ...

Her dress was torn. Dried mud crusted around her bare feet and ankles. She simply stared, after running away from the exact monster that stood before her. There was nowhere ...

CHAPTER FIVE The house was incredibly enormous, and made me feel like the insignificant figure I was. The driver helped me bring my bags to the large oak doors. "Good ...

It was good, but predictable. I loved your details and your emotion, but I knew what was going to happen. To make it more alluring you can add a twist, ...

]Memo: So I never thought I would get to a part three. So I guess I will be writing a whole lot more on this. Clothes exploded out of Bridget's ...

Yeah, so I almost cried while reading this. Only thing that I have are: “You looked beautiful with your grey sweats and yellow tee-shirt, bright blue rain coat atop with ...

This was good, I liked it. You mind is very creative. Just be careful when you are writing in a stream of consciousness. Why don’t you just add ‘No Summer’ ...