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I must say that i really enjoyed reading this story. It definatly hand an attention grabber, and the plot was there as well. i didnt notice any grammer mistakes which ...

This is something that i wrote on an impulse, so i just wanted to know if its any good and if i have any talent as a writer. When the ...

Hello, now when i first looked through this the description caught my eye. you have alot in there that is just very rendom and has nothing to do with your ...

I do think that this was very short, but short dosnt always mean it's bad. After reading this poem a few times over i still dont understand what it's truley ...

Thank you all so much for the help. I hope that I am able to fix this quickly so that I can get on with the rest of my story. ...

Im kinda new at this so, i wrote this prologue to a story im working on and i just want to know what i can do to fix it up. ...

I really enjoyed reading this poem, it has very good flow and emotion. as for a name theres multiple things that it could be. My True Love The Way I ...

Ok right off the bat, i was hooked by this story. The true emotion that i saw in this writing was amazing, i absolutly loved it. Also good use of ...

Hey, i have to say that i really like this poem. You have some very great imagination put into this, and i for one appreciate that. The flow is easy ...

Ok first of all i love how the begining started in a dream. It totaly caught my attention, and it kept me wanting more. Secondly i found that you had ...

thank you so much you two for the reviews. i know that i have alot of work to do, this was only a rough draft. this has helped me alot

Chapter One Why does it always seem like the world is out to get you? And when you ask someone what to do, or how to fix it they turn ...